my rap

YO THIS HERE IS 4 ALL THE PEOPLE THAT WANT TO GET THERE SHIT HEARD...NO BULL SHIT POSTS!


1 2 3 AND TO THE 4

IM GETTIN READY TO FUCK UP THE INDUSRTYS STATUS QUO

IM LYRICALLY AND EMPIRICALLY GIFTED,

IMMA SUPRISE YALL LIKE WHEN OJ GOT ACQUITTED,

WHEN I BATTLE PEOPLE ITS JUST UNFAIR,

I HOLD IT DOWN AND YALL ARE UNAWARE,

I PUT MORE DAMAGE ON THE MIC THAT GAME DOES WITH 50,

ALL MY SHIT IS REAL AND THATS NO MYSTERY,

I WOULD KEEP GOING WITH THE RAP AND MAKE YOU LOOK EVEN WORSE,

BUT I REALLY DONT FEEL LIKE CALLING IN A NURSE






alright...alright...that was sick but you used to many big words...wtf....Well regardless my rhymes will put you in the NEW YORK TIMES//
I come with power to “defeat”, you gon need a MIC 2 STOP IT//
I’ll probably stomp on you unintentionally cuz you MI-CRO-SCOPIC//
Your “Rhymes a Joke” lemme guess, you couldn’t “find the scope”?//
I’ll have you left just like your rhymes, cause your Rhymes is Broke//
Imma Design your face just like a Kaleidoscope//
If you anger me, my daggers gonna COLLIDE-with ya-THROAT//
You act famous, maybe on your corner where you BUY~the~DOPE//
But round here? I couldn’t find you with a MICROSCOPE//
Sorry Kid, I really wish I could say I~SEE~YOU//
But only time I do is when you in the I.C.U//Intensive Care Unit
When It comes 2 Rhymin I don’t care Christain, Catholic, Or Anglican//
I’ll have u stunned so bad you’ll stand just like a MANICAN//
I’m so hott, yet so cold, im like Jesus was//(Powerful)
Only time u coulnd’t feel me’s under ANESTHESIA//
When I talk I won’t take it back, cause what I say, I meant it//
You better believe Im from I.B that makes me SO AUTHENTIC//I.B a.k.a IllBattle
SO baiscally I don' understand why u wanna b facing me//
Im worth about 10 times more then your ACV//
So tell me is it really me that your tryna battle?//
10 cents your ACV, which is your ACTUAL CASH VALUE//(Check the Dictionary)
I come in “storming”, “Whore, this” is Me, Im like a GLOBAL WARMING//
SO Beware Cajun cause this IS your ONLY~WARNING

im so not reading all dat lolz (;

yeh thats just too long O.O

yea but kik ass

lol red like 5 lines then i got borred lol

meany

rofl way to long m8

omg i read it lol!!

nice rap but try to cut sum stuff out bnut other wise nice

or just space it out and gj

lol nice dude u should join a rap contest.


*hint*lol watch out no racis stuff in that contest

here is my rap.


i said colt 45 and 2 zig zags baby thats all we need.
we can go to the park after dark smoke that tomb of weed.
as the mariajona burns we can take our turns singin them dirty rap songs.
stop and hit the bong like chech and chong i said taste from here to hong kong.
so roll roll my joint pick out the seeds and stems felling high as hell flyin threw palmvile skatein on jaggy rims.
so roll roll the 83 cadillac coup deville if my tanks and my c'ds just sell i bet my caddy will.
oh it was just sun down in this small white town they call east palmville.
when the afro man walk threw the white land houses wen't up for sale.
so i was standing on the cornor selling rap c'ds tell i met a little girl name jan. (jan)
i let her ride in my caddy cause i didn't know her daddy was the lead of ther kool klutz klan.
so we fucked on the bed fucked on the floor fucked so long i keepa fuckin that hoe.
yea we fucked to left fucked to right she sucked my dick till the shit turned white.



thankz leave a comment.

Ok LMFAO, Guest.

You plagiarized someone else's freestyle...

All you did was look up sick freestyle/raps on google and you
copied and pasted it here.

The REASON I KNOW is because I use to post stuff and battle people there....

Your a looser, trying to be cool.

Here's the link he stole it from: http://lounge.moviecodec.com/music/freestyle-rap-15410/

i read it all. and i loved it bus some hoes
!